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Jonnyed
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posted 10-12-2015 05:08 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jonnyed   Click Here to Email Jonnyed     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
I was recently reading through a collection of poems by W.H. Auden and came across one of his poems named "Moon Landing" from August 1969. It has a curmudgeon, old man-grumpy kind of humor about it. I especially like his line on Homer's heroes and TV coverage. If you've never seen the poem before, here it is:
Moon Landing

It’s natural the Boys should whoop it up for
so huge a phallic triumph, an adventure
it would not have occurred to women
to think worth while, made possible only

because we like huddling in gangs and knowing
the exact time: yes, our sex may in fairness
hurrah the deed, although the motives
that primed it were somewhat less than menschlich.

A grand gesture. But what does it period?
What does it osse? We were always adroiter
with objects than lives, and more facile
at courage than kindness: from the moment

the first flint was flaked this landing was merely
a matter of time. But our selves, like Adam’s,
still don’t fit us exactly, modern
only in this – our lack of decorum.

Homer’s heroes were certainly no braver
than our Trio, but more fortunate: Hector
was excused the insult of having
his valor covered by television.

Worth going to see? I can well believe it.
Worth seeing? Mneh! I once rode through a desert
and was not charmed: give me a watered
lively garden, remote from blatherers

about the New, the von Brauns and their ilk, where
on August mornings I can count the morning
glories, where to die has a meaning,
and no engine can shift my perspective.

Unsmudged, thank God, my Moon still queens the Heavens
as She ebbs and fulls, a Presence to glop at,
Her Old Man, made of grit not protein,
still visits my Austrian several

with His old detachment, and the old warnings
still have power to scare me: Hybris comes to
an ugly finish, Irreverence
is a greater oaf than Superstition.

Our apparatniks will continue making
the usual squalid mess called History:
all we can pray for is that artists,
chefs and saints may still appear to blithe it.

drifting to the right
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posted 10-13-2015 09:10 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for drifting to the right     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Knowest not I of line, cadence, meter, and rhyme,
lilting lyrics, thoughts sublime.
Devoid of art, this old fart...
Methinks it stinks.

Apologies to the Offended.

carmelo
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posted 10-13-2015 07:53 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for carmelo   Click Here to Email carmelo     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
For hubris the punishment, my dear poet nut, was for Apollo a huge budget cut.

Jonnyed
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posted 10-13-2015 08:17 PM     Click Here to See the Profile for Jonnyed   Click Here to Email Jonnyed     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Auden was a pretty well established poet by 1969 (he died just 4 years later) but I think the poem is a fizzle.

What an occasion to write something grand, and yet this poem is off the mark and not very satisfying.

Thank god we still have Alan Bean to paint the story because the poets didn't really rise to it.

RobertB
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posted 10-17-2015 10:00 AM     Click Here to See the Profile for RobertB   Click Here to Email RobertB     Edit/Delete Message   Reply w/Quote
Michael Collins did a pretty good prose epic.

And Aldrin's stories are worthy of any Greek play.

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